(Script until prologue part 2) Fire Emblem: Eagles & Lions (updated 24-3-2021)

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good idea, I may include it

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And then make him realise it was all a farce at the end but Rhea kills him and makes him into a martyr.
(As we haven’t been told how Loog died, but judging by it being the HOLY kingdom of Faerghus, he might have been proclaimed a saint)

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Fits with it, now I have to think how to include Loog’s descendants

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Make him older, like Sigurd and already have children. Easy!

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Surprisingly good! thanks for the ideas

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And his son becomes the first king and is told by Rhea his father died a martyr and easily puppeting the boy.

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Clasic plot from 3H

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I think modeling it after a classical tragedy would work.
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(yup, FE4 gen 1 follows the formula to the point!)

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30

Thanks for reading.
I’ll fix those problems that you pointed when I’m able to.

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I’ve read your stuff and I have a question: Why did you write that only the Emperor has a crest?

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Only the emperor is known to have a crest

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Wait… Weren’t crest a common knowledge? To a point the houses were a activelly pursuing marriage between people with crests?

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I want to introduce It after the war

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I don’t think it makes sense TBH. The crest were a major part of Fódlan’s culture from the begining.
Maybe just have it so that the Empire has the weapons locked somewhere?

Having that in mind, I’ve rewritten your entire text.

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Thanks, I’ll read it when i’m able to

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Hi! I have a couple of questions before I start with the part 2 prologue part of your script:

  • Would you like feedback on the opening sequence as well, or was it only to clarify some things?
  • I haven’t played or seen 3 Houses, so if this is in the same universe, there may be somethings I’m not familiar with. Will that be okay with you?
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After reading it,

I think the changes you made fit correctly with the story, but there is a detail I must point:

  • Lambert called prince to loog, when he’s just a nobleman, as the holy kingdom of faerghus wasn’t created yet…

About this, I have a better Idea, why not making Seiros to be his wife?

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I just left what you’ve written, you’ve called him a prince first.

Do you really think him banging the Archbishop is a good idea?

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look at Dimitri and F!Byleth

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-Feel free to leave feedback also in the opening sequence.

-If you haven’t played 3H you give me other point of view, so no problem

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