Alright, finally beat the game as of literally like 40 minutes ago.
Fantastic Translation! I would love to read the original script just to cross-reference and see what liberties were taken on the whole, but I really do think you sold the tone of the story and the impact of the characters really well. The Archanaean cast does so much with their comparatively little time for characterisation, got a great feel for this cast thanks to book 2 as previously my only exposure to them was through fe1 and fe11 with heroes adding some little pieces here and there. Book 2 especially felt really well done, I think the story is what made me blitz it in just under 2 weeks (well, that and the pretty easy difficulty of fe3 overall, it seems). Thanks for updating the translation and bringing this to a new audience!