Maybe I can provide some feedback because my hack also deals with mature themes. Arch already talked about how FE4 does it well, so hopefully my personal experience as a hacker as well can be helpful. I’m gonna soapbox for a bit.
Edgy for this post is defined as “tries to be mature” and that can take form in profane language or, well to be completely honest, incredibly fucked shit like stuff that can happen to children.
First of all, its straight up a nooby hacker mistake to frontload a bunch of themes and “cool moments in your head” at the beginning of a project, because most either want to show off and leave a lasting first impression, or have somehting cool and think they need to show it off as soon as possible, or they want to showcase it but are too green to do it gracefully yet. Bloodlines suffered hard from this in its first first first ever patch. its themes of racism and, well, fate i guess, were pretty heavy handed. And its more serious themes, like suicide, even in its most recent public patch (which hasn’t been updated in 6 years) could’ve been handled better, even it came from a personal place, and has since been improved.
So, just by judging on the screen shots and general sentiments from the community, your more mature themes should certainly be dialed back extremely hard.
The desire to be like Berserk or the Witcher is understandable. I haven’t read either, but I imagine the authors are incredibly professional, and don’t constantly frontload and beat their players over the head with whatever mature themes it has.
Now, one might ask “but Berserk is SUPER dark and upfront with their themes, its gory too so what”.
Well, here’s the next problem… and its not your fault, its like, the problem with Fire Emblem and profanity in general. Profanity looks really silly when its coming out of colorful sprites from a 2003 kids game
media like Berserk and Witcher have the aesthetics and style to match the language and themes it shoots for. Berserk has literal god-tier visuals in the manga and whatever nasty bullshit is going on or is being said, its packaged and presented in a kick-ass way.
What do Fire Emblem ROM hacks have? splices? text bubbles? 15 colors plus a transparent BG? Its just not the same, and its really jarring when that language is used while trying to take itself seriously. Seeing the F word, let alone the more X rated writing in this hack, will 9/10 come off as bizarre, out-of-place and at worst, completely unnecessary and tasteless. And add to that you seem to not be letting up with this language throughout the entire 5-or-so chapters, its easy to understand why players would find it very uncool.
This applies to most fan work. And its something even I only visit in my own project midway through, after careful re-writes, over the course of years. Dealing with mature themes gracefully in a ROMhack for a video game no less takes time and experience as a writer and project hacker person.
And to go back to Jugdral/ actual FEs, there are so many more ways to subtly or tastefully bring up your themes of brigandry or kidnapping or whatever. Is there really a thematic difference between a bandit gang kidnapping children from their homes VS, what seems to be, the same bandit openly assaulting a kid in front of their parents? I can tell you right now, they’re both fucked, but one gets the point across without exposing the playerbase to really, really sensitive and triggering (in its actual definition) scenarios. Sacred Stones is really, really dark, but it doesn’t bonk your head over its themes of corruption and greed.
idk