Iāve played up to chapter 21x. I donāt want to clog the thread with too many of these ātypo reportā posts, but I also donāt want to find myself making one with a hundred images, so I think Iāll do this one and then another at the end. You know the drill at this point.
Typos
Not yours alone
quite an aggressive temperament
can we disregard
Now then, how long will it be until the enemy lets up?
Allow your loyal soldiers
See to it
Youāre confident in this decision. āConfident withā exists, but from what Iāve gathered it doesnāt fit in this context. Do forgive me if Iām wrong. Iām not a native English speaker and sometimes these oddities of the language get the best of me, haha.
Some commotion
One and the same
The lives of others
Your fatherās life
By all means
In such a barbaric manner
are closing in on the hostages
Screenshot makes it hard to tell, but this is a question. It should end on a question mark.
I brought its destruction.
in the Dalmask and Talford regions
to find our way
that was a scream
These two objective texts donāt fit in their boxes. Also, I just noticed the weird visual glitch with the numbers in the second one. Not sure whatās up with that.
No offense
you aināt
Unnecessary in
That you take shelter
Remove the āmany of.ā Leave it at āour forces have already suffered a heavy blow.ā I feel that sounds better.
You must protect at least 3 watchmen
after the war
Missing dot here. I know, big deal. Iāve not been keeping track of these little punctuation mistakes as much as the proper typos, becauseā¦ well, personally, I donāt notice them as much. But eh, here, have one.
changing your mind
It wasnāt until I returned from Celyste about four years ago that I learned
I can attest
a handful of times
starting to think
left in a hurry
and hers
That first period should be a comma. Again, I kinda feel bad bringing these insignificant punctuation mistakes to your attention, but given that this is the main antagonistās bio, I figured I might as well.
a long way
The Rogue of Righteousness. I almost didnāt catch this one. Righteousness is such a handful of a word, itās easy to miss the odd vowel.
Thieves
This sentence is weird. I think what you were trying to convey here is āI heard many rumors that strange Pegasi and Wyvern riders have our harbor on lockdown.ā That works, Iād say.
First comma is unnecessary. Sorry, sorry. I guess I was feeling particularly nitpicky that day.
Jubir is misspelled in these two instances.
for the greater good
to persuade
what I have always been
in her ancestorsā methods
looking for redemption
I always thought
the house Ashmonte
than yours
of yours
Issues
The sequel to the unknown soldier from my previous post: There is a single Celyste cavalier among the Proclaimer reinforcements in chapter 20.
The flashback to Devante and Alouetteās confrontation during Queenieās conversation in chapter 20 still uses the old version of Devanteās portrait. Iād forgotten how derpy he looked lol.
Silver Paladin Danika appears to be immune to the halberdās effective damage. This is odd, because as you can see on the second image, enemy silver paladins suffer effective damage from the halberd. I also seem to recall Danika taking effective damage prior to promotion. Strange.
Assassin Atticus cannot use the longbow even though he has the weapon rank for it. If the longbows are meant to only be usable by archers and snipers, please change the weaponās description to reflect this, as it currently only says ānon-mounted only.ā
Still loving the hack. In fact, I think Iām liking it better this second time around. Difficult feels a lot better than Maddening did. But thatās just me. I just wish I had a couple more deployment slots. Too many cool fellows Iād like to put in the team, haha. Even had to bench my man Kurtis. I still love that beard, but he had his chance. Itās time for others to shine.
Also, Iād just like to say that chapter 17x was absolutely brutal. That was darker than Iāve come to expect from this game. I mean it in a good way, loved that map for what it was.
