Finally ready to give my thoughts.
Bugs are pretty minor, but I play without animations. The biggest one, was not being able to take stuff out of the convoy.
All the maps felt like they belonged in the story, which is what I love about your work. Still really good. The 2nd Leticia map, I believe chapter 3. Is the only one I think could be improved on. The layout is a bit odd, but still ok.
I think Adam needs to be buffed, he lacks the utility of Eve but still isn’t very good. Maybe give him bow access to give me a niche.
I love all the characters, even Theo. You can see him realize his bias when interacting with Sid. I don’t think you can improve on the writing much, it’s fantastic. A few errors, but nothing that is a big deal.
I’m not a fan of the capture mechanic, but it works.
I’m looking forward to your next update. I can’t think of anything else to say at the moment, but I may have more thoughts later.
Edit: another thought. The farm chapter, 4 I believe. Would be better imo if you move a chunk of reinforcements to the left side of the map. That way you can hold the bridges.