I said I’d play this and dammit I meant it.
Here’s a “review”/feedback thing I wrote, hope it helps: http://pastebin.com/wsejASuw
Noticeable stuff: Make the new enemy class cards match the vanilla ones, they look out of place, maybe do a bit of rebalancing here and there, and redo some text formatting, some pauses are awkward. Otherwise everything is pretty solid, and I especially loved all the talk events you had going on. I hope you can keep those up in future chapters with what I assume will be a large cast.
Anyways, I liked it a lot. Plenty of special stuff to distinguish it from other hacks, and all of them are competently executed. Keep up the good work. Not as good as TQL is, but you’re certainly trying